I really disliked this pattern. The edging and finishing seemed very off, like it was slapped together. Straight edging without a pattern to clean seam would be preferred, with an edging perhaps added after the piece was sewn together.
The pattern is from a Phentex Yarns Dynasty leaflet, #99000600502.
As I opted to use a variegated yarn instead of the striped pattern, it is possible this piece would look better had I done what the pattern called for. As it is, I maintain the edging could be improved.