Made a few changes - I wanted it to sit closer to my neck. More details on the blog.

cast on again after twisting the first attempt. Followed pattern for the yoke section. Used long tail cast on.

Think I’ll do a few more rows before dividing up for armholes and torso though. I don’t want the neckline to be stretched out wide so I think a few more rows will allow for the extra room needed to go over my very straight shoulders.
worked six extra rows before dividing for the underarms.
decreased as per pattern approx every six rows then worked straight .
used short rows to shape sleeve head before knitting sleeves.
cast off with straight hem as ran out of yarn.