I looked at my previous version and started this one from the ribbing, on 4.5mm and 6mm needles. I found it was too large though, and restarted with a new skein and 4mm and 5.5mm needles, and I think this version is better.

Increase used: yarn over, twisted in the next round. This does not pull as much and create an obvious increase row.

BOR set at left shoulder.

Sleeve separation: b=70, f=66, sl=40, ua=7

Body length = 4.5” before ribbing.

Adding a few more short rows to the lower back would have been good as I only did 3.
The body was bound off in pattern.

I put 8 decreases into the sleeves.

To cast off the sleeves, I used Jeny’s surprisingly stretchy cast off (using a cable cast off was too tight).