I love this pattern and would love to make it again in a few other colors!

My mods were -
I made the lace repeat at the neck a little narrower (one full repeat) and I added a couple edge stitches in garter stitch to keep the edge from curling under.

I made the tuck in the back smaller so it wasn’t quite so full.

I also changed the lace pattern just slightly so it was symmetrical.