Made some revisions and improvements for sizing, fit, etc. Added length in the body, made the ribbing deeper, made sleeves full length instead of bracelet length, added pockets, tweaked the collar construction. Much happier with these results, although I do still like the original version--it’s just too tiny!

Pattern is in progress; I’m working out the numbers for size grading and yardage, and hoping to have it out to the tech editor in the next week or two.